A man walked into a bar and spotted
his best friend.
"Bestie hey what's up."
"Cleaning up the bar man, what
about you."
"Dunno" he said spotting
the record player.
Excitedly he walked towards it.
"Fun fun fun" he exclaimed.
"Good golly it looks even better
up close."
"How about you give it a
try" his friend said.
"I would love to."
Johnny turned on the record player to
gangnam style.
"Killing it!!!"
Laughing, Johnny realized he was very
tired.
"Man I could sure use a
break" he sighed.
"No breaks keep dancing."
Ugh he groaned in tiredness
Very tired
Waiting for his friend
eXpectantly
Young man dead man
Nice and short, a great story about a man who dies from doing what he loves.
ReplyDeletePunctuation ceases starting at "O" in the alphabet, perhaps it is a form of technique which adds to the dramatics, very good.
I agree with Rindle Dindle. A nice, succinct story, but the punctuation from O on seems to be an issue.
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