Rain
*ahem*
pitter patter pitter patter
that's the sound rain makes
pitter patter
the sound when you're warming up to a blanket
pitter patter
the sound when you're trying to sleep
BOOM
oh dang man you better get out of bed that lightning just struck the tree in your frontyard
pitter patter
the sound rain makes when you're rushing down the stairs
pitter patter
the sound rain makes when you're looking for water
"you're rain why wont you put out the fire"
pitter patter
*ahem*
Rain
This was very original and well done! One thing to make it better would be to keep a central theme instead of jumping all over the place. I do really like this poem! Good job!
ReplyDeleteVery well thought out.
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